I finished my first full draft of the pilot for HALF-LIGHT. I think it’s pretty good? Question mark? There’s a lot of work to do and one big creative decision to make before I jump into the rewrite. I’m only following two storylines in this episode, but there’s a third character I want to introduce immediately in episode two. Now I’m thinking about whether or not to add them as a runner in this episode, but I don’t want to slow the pace or dilute the impact of the stories I have now.
Love that first page. "Body by biscuits and gravy" is perfection. Will be curious to see where you take it! Thank you for sharing.
Thanks for sharing that page, Mickey. Love the tone so far, and I wish I could keep reading.
As always, there were snips of writing advice I had to write down :). I can't wait to watch Half-Light when it makes its way into the world!
This is incredibly helpful and inspiring, as usual!
Half-Light is intriguing. Thanks for sharing this - love the way music leads you to the story! 🎶
Love that first page. Let me know if you'd like feedback on this draft, happy to read it.
Thx for this. Look forward to seeing you out on the strike lines!